When she walks down the street, which is a bit too dark.
With no lightning at all, Not even a single spark.
She seems to be brave,
she seems to be strong.
But she fears the presence,
of someone very wrong.
She has a deep fear,
of being another prey.
That’s why she is forced to keep,
a bottle of pepper spray.
She was attacked as a lady,
she was attacked even in her childhood.
He did not only give scars
but took from her life, all that was good.
When she is raped,
not only her life goes in vain.
But her parents and her family,
also feel the pain.
Because every rape victim,
is a daughter, sister, and wife.
And every rapist
is the destroyer of her life.
Enough of candle marches,
it’s time to give this nation a shape.
It’s time to bring a change in society,
by eradicating this sin called RAPE.
-Aditya Singh Rawat
32 Comments on “The sin called Rape”
Your writing is so intense, powerful and thought provoking… loved it!
Good message for the society
Beautifully penned down ! 😍
Keep writing 👏🏻👏🏻
Very well said 👏
Wow! What a deep thoughts dear,God bless you beta ,only such kind of a thoughts can change the world.
I am deeply amazed by how carefully and beautifully you have given these thoughts the shape of a poem. Gorgeous work, Aditya! Keep writing!
amazing budding star
Beautifully penned down!! 👍🏻👍🏻
Keep writing 👏🏻👏🏻
Very valuable thought !such an inspirational writing can change the world; keep it up!
Very well written. I admire how you express this sensitive topic with the right emotional intensity. Keep it up!
Wow ! what a poem on sensitive topic really great
Keep it up
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Wow amazing work….
Amazing
Very nice… Keep it up beta…
Commendable…. Such feeling from a teenage boy… Proud of u
Really heart touching and stirring…
Very ❤️ warming & empathetic
Very good
Awesome rap✨❤️💥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥and I think this is a very highly time and we all have to stand against the rape victims..
Ma’am, what you have written is representing a very negative and wrong opinion to the viewers. I request you to please correct your comment.
Thank you.
Excellent one. Keep going
Very nice lines.. Aditya.. keep writing.. stay blessed
Aditya
The scope of your thinking is very large.
Expecting more creativity from your side….well done 👏👏
Keep it up Aditya very well written
Very intense….. well done…
Such a deep thought at such a tender age…..hope people of all age become sensitive on this issue… Bless u
Very well expressed…Good job Àadi.
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